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My Heart


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DOS

 Genre: Heavy Metal
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This song metal and theres alot of screaming...and..enjoy.
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Lyrics
This knife resembles my life
as it falls to the pit of grace

I look at it clearly.

Chorus:
Hold me tight before I die
Don't let go when I have lost my nerves

My heart was stolen away from you.
so far away that I can't reach a thousand miles.

Chorus:
Hold me tight before I die
Don't let when I have lost my nerves

through the angony, through
the bloody faces of you
will have been forgotten.


Chorus:
Hold me tight before I die
Don't let when I have lost my nerves

baby your the one who I should stand by with
baby your never the one who gets hurt


Chorus:
Hold me tight before I die
Don't let when I have lost my nerves

through the angony, through
the bloody faces of you
will have been forgotten.
Song Stats
Hits: 568
Comments: 4
Fans: 0
Plays: 117
Downloads: 19
Votes: 2
Uploaded: May 04, 2006 - 10:46:27 AM
Last Updated: May 04, 2006 - 09:53:52 AM Last Played: Oct 12, 2007 - 06:41:21 AM
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Comments
snowdragon said 1282 days ago (May 7th, 2006)
Yer gettin' there kid
There's a nice early Punk feel to this that I liked.

And, this is light-years ahead of some of your first posts.

My one suggestion would be to add some drum fills.
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DJ_Veit said 1267 days ago (May 21st, 2006)
finally someone that likes my kind of music!
i love this kind of stuff but dude u really gotta work on ur scream.... i
mean u have potential but it sounds like ur just distorting ur voice and
not actually.... screaming so it sounds a little forced. to illustrate what
i mean listen to songs by the number 12 looks likes you to hear some
authentic screams. but keep working and keep making this kind of
music.
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annalia said 1225 days ago (July 3rd, 2006)
Ditto on ur scream
Gotta work on your scream and make it sound more real than distorted.
Although not my style, overall good for todays style music.
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annalia said 1225 days ago (July 3rd, 2006)
Good Lyrics
You do have today style talent, that's for sure and good writing skills too.

I still like to be able to understand the words in a song without having to read the lyrics but that's me.
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Heavy metal, sometimes referred to as simply metal, is a form of music characterised by aggressive, driving rhythms and highly amplified distorted guitars. Heavy metal is a development of blues, blues rock, rock and prog rock. Its origins lie in the

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