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Lovesong


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Wildcat

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Directly from the heart into Garageband.This song will need more time to evolve,but its the same with songs like with love, it always needs time to grow ....
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Lyrics
One Day,
I will invite you to my place.
This is where we want to be,
and we play our songs...
We beleave in our music
and we trust in live.

Satisfied
No wishes
cause our live is rich
cause we are full of Love

One Day,
I will invite you to my place
this is where we want to be...
lets cellebrate our live
lets cellebrate our music
lets cellebrate our love, love , love
Song Stats
Hits: 1285
Comments: 14
Fans: 3
Plays: 195
Downloads: 43
Votes: 7
Uploaded: Jul 18, 2006 - 10:25:15 AM
Last Updated: Jul 18, 2006 - 03:32:17 PM Last Played: Oct 05, 2009 - 12:22:17 PM
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Hardware:
MXL-Microphone
M-Audio Keystation
M-Audio Fasttrack
Software:
Garage Band
Comments
drakonis said 1210 days ago (July 18th, 2006)
pretty outline
I like the song melody over the top of the piano and strings. Your singing
sounded a little hesitant and rushed on this, and a little too far away. I
think your voice should be a little closer, and maybe you can add a little
bit of room reverb to help it match the piano sound. Hopefully you will
post the lyrics. This sounds like a good first part of a song... then after
this you need a "chorus" section to change the repetition of the piano,
then repeat the first part again. The piano and strings and harmonies
sound a little bit like Beatles or ELO, nice stuff.
ttfn,
Drakonis
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Wildcat said 1210 days ago (July 18th, 2006)
pretty outline
Thank you Drakonis,
you gave me good suggestions.That will help when i go on with this song.This
moment the song is still swimming on the surface area, but i will dive in it
deeper the next time. Now i will add the Lyrics.
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stevel said 1210 days ago (July 18th, 2006)
Melodic
This is a nice melodic track...I like the intimacy of the performace you
have here. Got a similar feel to some Cat Power material. I do agree that
you just boost the vocals up a bit..not too much but they do sound a little
hesitant in the mix
Very nice
Steve
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stevel said 1210 days ago (July 18th, 2006)
Melodic
This is a nice melodic track...I like the intimacy of the performace you
have here. Got a similar feel to some Cat Power material. I do agree that
you just boost the vocals up a bit..not too much but they do sound a little
hesitant in the mix
Very nice
Steve
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Wildcat said 1210 days ago (July 18th, 2006)
Melodic
Thank you for your comment, and right,... it will be my main lesson to learn not
to hide anymore with my vocals.
Check out my latest song called Somewhere in No Man´s Land
alley-oop said 1210 days ago (July 18th, 2006)
Your beautiful spirit
shines through your song..I love the words, you have a sweet voice.
Your phrasing and song structure reminds me of John Lennon.
I understand the hesitancy when singing. Just remember, right before
you record your voice..take a moment..think about what's inside
you...you have a beautiful message. It's a rare gift to sing from the
heart. you do. Let that flow when you sing..of course you must think of
breathing and timing and pitch. ;-)
Sing the song, go back..mute that track, sing again, repeat that until
you've recorded the track 5 times. By the last time you will be really
relaxed.
Then you can listen through them and pick the phrases that you like
from each pass. Sometimes it all comes together on one recording.
Sometimes you may choose from 3 or 4.
Get those vocals out front. We want to hear you!
great job!
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Wildcat said 1210 days ago (July 18th, 2006)
Your beautiful spirit
I am so glad about such kind and helpfull comments. I will try to follow your
suggestions. Thanks.
Check out my latest song called Somewhere in No Man´s Land
said 1210 days ago (July 18th, 2006)
NICE LOVE SONG!
You didn't have to write a song to me? The voice is flat in a few places but i can hear the melody coming through! Maybe do a couple more vocal takes! SOunds pretty good overall! The better you get with singing the more you will turn up the vocal tracks! Nice Wildcat!
jiguma said 1209 days ago (July 19th, 2006)
very good song
The strings and piano sound very nice - vocals a bit far back
I was looking at the comments so far on Lovesong, and they say similar
things to when I started at MJ - especially about vocals
I had no confidence in my voice, but people encouraged me to keep
trying and track it louder in the mix
I suspect your voice will improve dramatically as you get used to the
recording process - the song is very good
Touches of John Lennon as someone else said
it will be good to watch how you progress on this site
Neil
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EMP said 1209 days ago (July 19th, 2006)
Nice tune
I liked the track, not my cup of tea, still good.

I thought the vocals in the middle were a bit light, just needed a bit more
punch.

Apart from that a nice melow track.
Well Done.
EMP
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springclock said 1208 days ago (July 20th, 2006)
wow
like the piano sounds and I love how gentle your voice sounds....a sung
whisper....simple and elegant sounding....I love the purity to the lyrics as
well....good recording and a good song....thanks for sharing....nice work

peace....Ian Baird
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moorlandt said 1205 days ago (July 23rd, 2006)
so charming...
The first song where your voice comes up to the forefront. And it sounds very soft and sweet. No doubt that this is indeed 'straight from the heart'. It shines through all the way.
Although I hear some hesitation in your voice, this is only a matter of exercise and experience. A little suggestion to enhance the singing in general: put only one shell of your headphones on, so the other ear stays 'free' to listen to your voice as you are used to, and not altered digitally. Stupid trick, but it always works for me to keep my tune.
You REALLY have a lovely voice, so bring it out, concentrate, repeat a hundred times until you're satified (gosh, you should know how many takes it costs ME everytime). Don't be scared to hear yourself singing. I can hear you progressing by every track you upload. And this one is real heart-music.

Walter

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pevaristo said 1105 days ago (October 31st, 2006)
beautifull!!
just passing by to let you know how i enjoy this song so much!!!
the melody is just argh!!!! (english adjectives are not my best!!)
what i think is that this song takes me to somewhere in a big garden with... like a phantasy place!!! :)
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lavalamp said 568 days ago (April 20th, 2008)
Well written
Your voice could be up a bit more. It should be the focal point, not the piano.
But, this is a very, very good song. Dido-ish.

You should revisited or redo this. It's great.

LL
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