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A song inspired by personal events. GB drum loops used, everything else comes courtesy of my trusty synth. Enjoy.
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| gudkarma said 1951 days ago (July 7th, 2004) | |
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i wish had this talent i just can't seem to make things like this. i think this is sounds like hope. in my mind at least. it also sounds like heated noise and then a pause of all sensation except the feeling of lips on flesh. now i feel like words should bubble out of this piece. the poet in me. sorry. i think is really good. i like the different texture. also just past halfway when it quiets up...this almost sounds like rememberence and touching ones self as the mind froths the body into a heat of memory. Check out my latest song called Ocean The
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| MissChaos said 1951 days ago (July 7th, 2004) | |
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i wish had this talent Likewise. I would love to hear your poetry (which seems to capture the essense of this song) alongside the music. I may try to get some vocals to accompany this. But then again, I kind of need a break from this one. ;) Check out my latest song called Mama Cries - Album Version (MJRF)
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| TobinMueller said 1950 days ago (July 7th, 2004) | |
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Ray Lynch Nice track. Reminds me of Celestial Soda Pop by Ray Lynch. It has a bouncy happy feel with spiritual undertones. Like a happy, smiling Buddha. I think the repetition you use is well within the genre; if there is anything I would alter its your use of melody: I'd use one, instead of substituting melody with groove and arpeggio-chord progression. And then the idea of theme and variation could evolve with greater interest and intimacy. But this is a well produced track. Check out my latest song called Forge A New Life (MJRF)
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| gudkarma said 1950 days ago (July 7th, 2004) | |
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well.... if i put words to this...does it have to be pg-13 ? or can it simply be like my other poems? Check out my latest song called Ocean The
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| gudkarma said 1950 days ago (July 7th, 2004) | |
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well.... hmmmmmm......maybe we can make this into a collab? maybe you can send me the GB file so i can add some space and work in some words that way? let me know. oh, and dont email me off this site. it never gets to me, sradzikowski@mac.com Check out my latest song called Ocean The
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| MissChaos said 1950 days ago (July 7th, 2004) | |
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well.... PG-13? What fun would that be?! I'll email ya! Check out my latest song called Mama Cries - Album Version (MJRF)
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| gudkarma said 1950 days ago (July 7th, 2004) | |
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waiting.... ok i'll await your email. Check out my latest song called Ocean The
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| giovanni said 1950 days ago (July 7th, 2004) | |
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Very well produced! This is a great track and it has terrific production values. I really like the unpredictable-ness of it and the sounds you've chosen are very interesting. Check out my latest song called I Can't Remember Me
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| chikoppi said 1950 days ago (July 7th, 2004) | |
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Many hours I can so hear the love you poured into this one. Not only are there a lot of carefully considered details but each is delicately mixed just so. Its hard to make electronica emotive, but this piece is a good example of the possibilities. (8-8-7-7) Check out my latest song called Loop It or Lose It 9
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| packosmokes said 1950 days ago (July 8th, 2004) | |
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Wonderful 8-8-8-8 Wonderful enough to download and play over and over again. Check out my latest song called With You
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| Moodee said 1949 days ago (July 8th, 2004) | |
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A scenery... I like the way it is set up, and the "softness through sadness" of the themes. I'm gonna rush to listen to your other track !! Check out my latest song called Coalesce (Parkee mix) - re-uploaded
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| Ringo said 1949 days ago (July 8th, 2004) | |
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Read the blurb, Listened to the track (love those big synth washes at the beginning, had a real Roland sound to them I thought, odd because you are on a Korg...) And just started staring at the edge of my powerbook screen. All this electronic music just blurs the man/machine boundaries so much that I really got into the curvy corners...Completely sober too (unusual for me). God, this is a SEXY computer..... Ahem, anyway, subliminal in a real "prickly heat" kind of a way. Disturbingly good.... Check out my latest song called Real Slow
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| MissChaos said 1949 days ago (July 8th, 2004) | |
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Read the blurb, "Disturbingly Good".... Now that's a compliment! And that was the intention. You've made my day--all of you--thank you for the compliments. These songs I've created have saved me thousands of dollars in therapy costs. xoxoxo Check out my latest song called Mama Cries - Album Version (MJRF)
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| Cameron said 1949 days ago (July 8th, 2004) | |
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rich and varied You've got a lot of good ideas percolating on this track! Very well-produced too. I did find the drum track just a tiny bit too loud towards the end, but this is nitpicking. I agree with Tobin about using a definitive melody instead of the arpeggios. Perhaps use chipuni's suggestion of using that beginning piano theme, which was quite nice! Great electronica piece! P.S. You bring up an interesting point about music being "theraputic" (instead of lying on the psychiatrist's couch). Listening to people's songs is like listening to their brains! That's one of the main reasons I'm enjoying MacJams so much. Check out my latest song called EPONYM
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| Sista Mac said 1949 days ago (July 8th, 2004) | |
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Nice Changes! Very Nice! I like the changes you arranged in this song. Many ambient/ electronic songs seem to not have enough changes to keep them interesting. I can easily get lost in this tune. A good focusing song while painting or creating any form of visula art! Check out my latest song called I'm Not Trying
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| deeky said 1949 days ago (July 8th, 2004) | |
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Running My Fingers Through It After I ran my fingers through it, I felt it...and your inner beauty. I see you in there...I'm not sure if I should be happy or sad. I'm imagining how it is, how upredictable, unexplainable life and love is. How emotional and yet how desirable feelings of anything are. Good or bad it's all better than C, it's all better than blah, it's all better than being mute and feeling numb. |
| Paul_T said 1945 days ago (July 12th, 2004) | |
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This is my life! This gives me the impression of someone trying to make forward progress with all these diversions/ interruptions getting in the way. Very cool! I second (or third) the "musicmaking as cheap therapy" notion. I can't tell you how depressed I would feel if I wasn't creating stuff every night after the kids go to bed -- even if it's crap!!! Check out my latest song called Armor Pajamas
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| SlimGirlFat said 1944 days ago (July 14th, 2004) | |
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Gobsmackingly Good I so enjoyed this piece... I love the layers that describe feelings and it is the sort of track one can get inside. (weird but I hope you understand). More more more. :) I also fourth or fifth the therapy. I feel the creative outpouring of emotion coming out of so many artists on this site. This track was a real pleasure.. I'd be very interested at some point, in working with you (if you dont mind) SlimGirlFat Check out my latest song called Not Enough
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| _nderscore said 1935 days ago (July 22nd, 2004) | |
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yeah, i'm feelin it what a damn fine piece of music it sucks you in and then throws you on edge a few more times just to make sure lust-i'm hooked Check out my latest song called glyd
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| mcsweb said 1920 days ago (August 6th, 2004) | |
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Interesting story "behind the music", but I simply don't get that from it at all. Seems to space age and techno for anything so earthy a topic as lust. So ignoring that fact for a moment, the song makes a good entry into its stated genre. Nice transitions. Your keyboard has some great sounds! Check out my latest song called Pearls of Perfection
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| pooey said 1910 days ago (August 16th, 2004) | |
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Had to give this track a listen... ...as I just listened to the "remix" version by you and Moodee. The two songs have different personalities to be sure. And I like both equally. Very cool. Check out my latest song called Wake Up (Pooey Remix)
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| handovergold said 1910 days ago (August 16th, 2004) | |
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Had to give this track a listen... Did the same thing--just now.... agree with pooey. And I wish that I could make out the lyrics on the other one a bit more, we have a wonderful home studio, but macjams is on my puny computer with no other than internal speakers....posty pleeeze! oh, and by the way--me likey!----M Check out my latest song called The Tomorrow one
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| MissChaos said 1910 days ago (August 16th, 2004) | |
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Had to give this track a listen... Well thanks for the compliments! I didn't realize people would come back to listen to this "old" song after hearing the wonderful Moodee Remix. Next time I talk to him, I'll encourage Moodee to post the lyrics. They're pretty darn nifty if I do say so myself. (I think I just did say so!) Miss Chaos Check out my latest song called Mama Cries - Album Version (MJRF)
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| TalktoWind said 1908 days ago (August 18th, 2004) | |
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Very... wonderful track. I cannot express myself better because my english is too poor...but i really like your work! Rob Check out my latest song called Full Set 1 (19 min.)
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| thetiler said 1767 days ago (January 6th, 2005) | |
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Very nice tune!!! Like the bouncing back and forth in the earphones for sure. Loads of nice ideas and I mean loads. Your picture is just outstanding! To me very, very fitting for the tuning. It really gets your imagination going. I get a lot of inspiration from this whole package. I am glad I came over here. Thanks for the adventure. You sure are all over that keyboard! Bill "thetiler" Check out my latest song called The Bluebird Cafe (with two other guest)
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| Eccentrikamerika said 1748 days ago (January 25th, 2005) | |
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more worms!! this is my other favorite of yours. you have a way with melody and texture- and don't seem to underestimate the emotional range of a synth. great work. Check out my latest song called Car Go Fast
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| Swanny said 1662 days ago (April 21st, 2005) | |
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Well Produced ! What a well put together piece !!! Check out my latest song called Chillin
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| av01der said 1537 days ago (August 24th, 2005) | |
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Rock-solid. Solid trancey grooves. I like how you keep the synths varied and fresh on this song; the song never gets tired or boring. More like this, please! Check out my latest song called dawn/drive
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| gregd said 1516 days ago (September 14th, 2005) | |
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Neat Miss Chaos, As usual, nifty tune you've got here. I agree with chipuni that there could be a bit more motion, but I think you've got some inventive production. I like how you panned the tracks, and the cuts from left to right are just plain fun to listen to. Well done all in all. -Thelonius Check out my latest song called 08nov08
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| gregd said 1516 days ago (September 14th, 2005) | |
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Neat Miss Chaos, As usual, nifty tune you've got here. I agree with chipuni that there could be a bit more motion, but I think you've got some inventive production. I like how you panned the tracks, and the cuts from left to right are just plain fun to listen to. Well done all in all. -Thelonius Check out my latest song called 08nov08
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| Alannah said 1275 days ago (May 13th, 2006) | |
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I also loved .. the panning effects .... now I've gotta hunt down that remix I noticed people mentioned .... Check out my latest song called I'm Drownin' - Smokey VW (feat Alannah) + Outtaorbit
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| borisluxx said 1250 days ago (June 7th, 2006) | |
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Smooth and yummy . . . Like a good ice cream. The panning effects are a nice touch. It changes it up a little and keeps it interesting. I'd like to possibly collab with you if you're interested. I know that my techno-y, fast-paced tracks are no match for your beautiful, soothing melodies and soundscapes though. I'm just very impressed with your work. You've managed to get your sounds in GarageBand to sound nothing like the sounds in GarageBand. I'm jealous. : ) Take care and please let me know re: a collab. Peace! -Boris Luxx Check out my latest song called Never Say Goodbye - Bond Theme Callenge
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| guido11 said 1107 days ago (October 28th, 2006) | |
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eccezionale Articolata in una maniera eccezionale. tutto rientra , risuona, e ritorna per poi ripartire in una miriade di note. questa e' un'ottima musica per le mie orecchie! Check out my latest song called Suspension2
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| Estella said 1055 days ago (December 19th, 2006) | |
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technical question sweet song. not that i'll ever use this information, but since I was a pre-teen I wondered how a sound in a song can jump from left to right on a set of earphones. May I ask how you did that? Do you split the track and adjust the balance? We were just talking about balancing earlier, too : ) Check out my latest song called Este Momento
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| MissChaos said 1055 days ago (December 19th, 2006) | |
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hey estille I didn't think anyone went back to these old songs of mine. Actually, I was very, very new to Garageband when I recorded this tune (which probably explains the lack of audio quality!). But the panning effect was done straight from my synthesizer and not GarageBand. Since I can use my synth as either a MIDI controller or as an Audio instrument (creating wav forms the way you do with your guitar and voice), I can use the built-in sequencers and effects instead of using GarageBand's. That way, I have more control and more sophisticated panning (the back-and-forth you described). Does this help? It's really a matter of sliding the audio back and forth between the left and right channels. You can do it easily with the "Track Pan" slider in Garageband. :-) Thanks for stopping by! --- . . : : From near to far, from here to there, funny things are everywhere : : . . — Dr. Suess Check out my latest song called Mama Cries - Album Version (MJRF)
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| Estella said 1054 days ago (December 20th, 2006) | |
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thank you, that makes sense --- *estella Check out my latest song called Este Momento
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chipuni
Quite a nice new age song!
I would have loved to hear the piano piece that you used as the introduction within the main body of the song. It was a nice pattern. The closest that I heard was an echo in the guitar in the middle of the song.
I prefer to feel a bit more motion in the implied harmony. In particular, your use of the same note twelve times as a motif, and your arpeggios tended to be used a bit too much.
But you wrote a sweet piece of electronica, and I look forward to hearing more of your work!