Walking Out The Door

jesushairdo

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This was my first attempt to write an R&B song, but ended up sounding like this...... but I kind of liked it, because it's a really new sound for me.

*I seemed to have uploaded the wrong file by mistake... PeacePiano and mudmen, sorry for removing your comments! I had to upload the proper file again......

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Lyrics

Saturday morning
Haven't slept all night
The sun beams in
through the curtains

Innocent morning
Clear air
You took the blanket
all for yourself

Guess you wanna stay in your dream
until I make you a tea

I get out of bed quietly
put on the slippers
turn on the TV
and brush my teeth

While boiling the water
I am just sitting here
enjoying a moment of peace alone

Though you are beside me
I can't feel you
End is near
Is it me or you who's walking out the door
Please say no more

Weekends have passed
with no particular events
Our conversation has run dry

You say good morning
but I hear good bye
Early morning light wraps us up gently

We both know can't go on
We don't know when to move on

Though you are beside me
I can't feel you
End is near
Is it me or you who's walking out the door
Please say no more

Song Stats

Hits: 1197
Comments: 14
Fans: 6
Plays: 161
Downloads: 86
Votes: 5
Uploaded: Feb 26, 2007 - 06:45:17 AM
Last Updated: Feb 26, 2007 - 06:45:17 AM Last Played: Nov 06, 2009 - 07:11:40 AM

Song License

Creative Commons License:
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Song Actions

Keywords:

breakup (28), piano (709), R&B (75), AOR (2), Adult (21), Soft Rock (13), lost (64), love (1147), heartbreak (15), japanese (40)

Hardware:

Fernandez Bass
Korg M1

Software:

Garageband

Comments

jesushairdo	jesushairdo said 986 days ago (February 26th, 2007)
	PeacePiano Sorry for removing your comment, PeacePiano. It was lost when I replaced the song file.... Thank you very much for your comment! Good Song %u2014 02/25/07 - 09:04:54 AM peacepiano Very professional production here. Chorus is cool too! I like it. Thanks for sharing. Check out my latest song called Elephant in the Sky (Orchestra version)

alley-oop	alley-oop said 986 days ago (February 26th, 2007)
	Great mood Really fresh sound. Jesushairdosan. The vocal progression is confident. I hear a Steely Dan sophistication, Keyboards sound great! Check out my latest song called anymore

jesushairdo	jesushairdo said 984 days ago (February 28th, 2007)
	thanks! hey alley-oop. cheers for listening and leaving a comment! Check out my latest song called Elephant in the Sky (Orchestra version)

Jim Bouchard

Jim Bouchard said 986 days ago (February 26th, 2007)

really great!
I think for your first attempt at an R&B song, you are very close in some respects, and the resulting song is excellent! It's got a lot more going on in it than a lot of R&B songs, and it's sort of undefinable. Really nice composition and then the part just before the piano solo is really nice. I like how it slips in between Japanese and English...very cool!

Check out my latest song called Weather or Not w/awigze

jesushairdo	jesushairdo said 984 days ago (February 28th, 2007)
	thank you! hi jim! thanks for taking time to comment. i dont usually listen to a lot of R&B songs. so it was a challenge for me. but im glad that i was close! Check out my latest song called Elephant in the Sky (Orchestra version)

TobinMueller

TobinMueller said 986 days ago (February 26th, 2007)

Progressions
Love the chord progressions, the pop jazz feel, the free movement, like a Legend or Connick cross-over pop song, which is really refreshing. The bass line is relatively high in several places, giving the track a lack of a real bottom and making it kind of thin in my ears, a demo sensibility; I thought it could have benefited from an additional instrument, like a rhythm guitar or even, on occasion, a lead guitar. The pizzicato phrases are a nice touch. Wonderful writing.

Check out my latest song called Forge A New Life (MJRF)

jesushairdo	jesushairdo said 984 days ago (February 28th, 2007)
	hey hi tobin! thank you very much for useful technical comment! yeah, it does sound a bit too light, doesnt it? ill add guitars and try to revise my bass line a bit. thanks always! Check out my latest song called Elephant in the Sky (Orchestra version)

jiguma	jiguma said 984 days ago (February 28th, 2007)
	Very smooth Always enjoy your songs JH. Very smooth, great playing and vocals. One of the best pop performers on MJ for my money! I hear Steely Dan often in your songs - jazz/rock/pop sensibilities and chops to match. Very professional, very confident - I hope you sell in Japan. Cheers, Neil Check out my latest song called Under My Skin

jesushairdo	jesushairdo said 983 days ago (March 1st, 2007)
	steely dan hey Neil. thank you very much for your comment! to be honest, i dont know Steely Dan very well, but i am guessing that he is one of those Adult Oriented Soft Rock artists? will check him out then. Check out my latest song called Elephant in the Sky (Orchestra version)

jiguma	jiguma said 983 days ago (March 1st, 2007)
	Steely Dan ...... ........ is a band - or rather a duo with rotating session musicians these days. You could do worse than listen to "Two Against Nature", their latest album. Jazz oriented rock/pop/blues - one of the best bands around. Neil --- WELL ENOUGH ALONE Check out my latest song called Under My Skin

craft	craft said 980 days ago (March 4th, 2007)
	don't understand a word but I like it... Great song... Full of emotion and great playing... Like it a lot... Very well done... Your voice flows very good in the song!!! :) http://www.macjams.com/song/29592 Check out my latest song called Blue Lights (feat. Spleenveil)

jesushairdo	jesushairdo said 960 days ago (March 24th, 2007)
	thanks! thank you for listening and taking time to commetn! im glad that you liked my song. Check out my latest song called Elephant in the Sky (Orchestra version)

Einarus

Einarus said 972 days ago (March 12th, 2007)

You never...
...disappoint me.
Judging from your previous uploads I have come to expect a certain level of quality of your songs and I'm thrilled to admit that you've lived up to those expectations every single time.

I love the piano part in this and the chord progression is really nice. I also agree with Tobin about the bass.

To no surprise, this is another download :)

-Einar S.

Check out my latest song called Good Things Come in Fours

jesushairdo	jesushairdo said 960 days ago (March 24th, 2007)
	hey einarus! cheers for your comment! i think i can improve a lot for the arragement of this song, but i might want to leave it for a while until i get a fresh idea... lol Check out my latest song called Elephant in the Sky (Orchestra version)

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