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I think this is a good song! The lyrics are probably my favorite of what I have written up to now. I think the vocal is okay also.
The recording maybe another matter. I went back to trying to add percussion with the midi keyboard and it is a little rough in places. Tell me whether you think I should have just left it off or not?
The recording maybe another matter. I went back to trying to add percussion with the midi keyboard and it is a little rough in places. Tell me whether you think I should have just left it off or not?
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Lyrics
She used to be my used to be but now she's my forever more
Because when I said the wrong thing she kicked me right out the door
It's a relationship made in heaven but seasoned and grilled in hell
A forgotten moment in a lost time that keeps me in a prison cell
Her mind would wander all over the map she had a sailor in every port
An imagination gone with the wind and a civil war in her throat
We would dance to a light fandango and swing on a star in the rain
And Jesse James couldn't steal from us because we had no shame
Come on honey give me a break
My mouth is out of control
I was a fool for them but I'm a fool for you and everybody knows
She never would give an inch she was the ruler of my brain
I always thought I was the smarter one but I got the blame
We would circle around each other like wrestlers in a ring
But she was a female spider and she had death in her sting
Come on honey give me a break
My moods are beyond control
I blistered their skin with just an ink pen
But I'm writing a poem for you
Because when I said the wrong thing she kicked me right out the door
It's a relationship made in heaven but seasoned and grilled in hell
A forgotten moment in a lost time that keeps me in a prison cell
Her mind would wander all over the map she had a sailor in every port
An imagination gone with the wind and a civil war in her throat
We would dance to a light fandango and swing on a star in the rain
And Jesse James couldn't steal from us because we had no shame
Come on honey give me a break
My mouth is out of control
I was a fool for them but I'm a fool for you and everybody knows
She never would give an inch she was the ruler of my brain
I always thought I was the smarter one but I got the blame
We would circle around each other like wrestlers in a ring
But she was a female spider and she had death in her sting
Come on honey give me a break
My moods are beyond control
I blistered their skin with just an ink pen
But I'm writing a poem for you
selters
I am glad I found the time to check this out Thomas! This song is very typical you. I really like this song and the hole s\production sounds very tight in my ears. You play a terrific lead on this one. I am not sure what this would sound like without the drums, I seriously don't think they make a difference, either of the ways. Your singing is as strong as I have gotten used to. You sound greeat, and the songwriting is spectacular! I love your music mister.