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moon song


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rainfice

 Genre: Acoustic
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Something new.
really rough live take, but i like the song. Never recorded it before.
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Lyrics
Feel free to manipulate my words; to edit and change phrase shape and time. I try to convince you. I swear to god I didn't think you'd mind.
I wish the moon would swallow the sun.

You're used to me by now, I'm sure, though I resurface as whomsoever I desire. There's no way to know except through memory, whether or not we're defeated by cold desire.
Why won't the moon just swallow the sun?

Are you awake and dying to be consumed?
Where do you wait to be led through?
I slip away to wipe of defeat and the never ending stare.
We find ouselves okay in spite of never knowing what to do.

I wish the moon would swallow,
Why won't the moon just swallow,
I want the moon to swallow,
Why can't the moon just swallow the sun.
Song Stats
Hits: 910
Comments: 10
Fans: 7
Plays: 169
Downloads: 89
Votes: 7
Uploaded: Jul 25, 2007 - 10:52:35 AM
Last Updated: Jul 25, 2007 - 10:55:28 AM Last Played: Nov 06, 2009 - 01:04:55 PM
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Comments
said 838 days ago (July 25th, 2007)
AND I LOVE THE SONG
Your are so good man... Like your voice and your guitar playing fits so well. Ah! yes this is an gold keeper... I put it to my fave d-load list and sure this is on top for a long time.
Thanks for sharing.

Take care
----
Kenta
rainfice said 759 days ago (October 12th, 2007)
thanks
Thank you for the comment. I'm sorry I didn't reply sooner, I just noticed the other day that I hadn't responded to anything posted on this song. Didn't mean to be rude.
I just posted a new version of this if you're interested.
-Rain
Check out my latest song called Moment
lengold said 837 days ago (July 26th, 2007)
Doesn't
sound rough to me. I really like the treatment you have given this song. A stark lonely beautiful guitar and a stark lonely beautiful vocal. Great lyrics from the heart. Love it. Downloaded. Thanks.
Cheers
Len
(Must play it again right now)
Check out my latest song called Dodgy Doughnut
Moviz said 837 days ago (July 26th, 2007)
Well this..
is certainly 'different'. I really like the passion and emotion in your voice and your lyrics, though (to me) they have an obscure meaning, they are very interesting and original carrying the song forward. It sort of has a Blues feel for me and I like it, Cheers M
Check out my latest song called A Soldiers Dream (Remix/record)
ceilidh said 836 days ago (July 27th, 2007)
fascinating,
almost hypnotic voice you have got rain. you don't sing the song, you LIVE the song. amazing listening, truly. great lyrics, great melody, great atmosphere. brilliant!
Check out my latest song called Gartan Mother's Lullaby
rainfice said 758 days ago (October 12th, 2007)
how rude of me
I just noticed today that I never responded to any of the comments on this page.
I do apologize. Haha, it'll never happen again.
Thank you for your kindness. I appreciate it.
Anyway, I just posted a new version of this song if you're into it.

-Rain
Check out my latest song called Moment
ledebutant said 836 days ago (July 27th, 2007)
Raw Beauty
Lordy, your voice is INCREDIBLE. I could listen to you sing all day long (although if the moon swallows the sun, I'll have to revise day to night).
The song has terrific dynamics and the passion in they way you play and sign is so immediate. It feels almost as though you're singing right into my ear.

This is a great live take. I'd love to hear a 'studio' version of this, but don't lose the rough edges that make the feelings so palpable.

I LOVE the line "I wish the moon would swallow the sun," so good on so many levels.
Check out my latest song called Black Star (MJ Live Aid w/jgurner)
rainfice said 758 days ago (October 12th, 2007)
delay
I can remember reading this when you first commented on it and being totally touched. I can't believe I didn't respond to any of the comments on this song. Not my style, and I do apologize.
Anyway, thank you for your words and thoughts. It's responses like that that drive us to do what we do, no?

I've redone and posted this song today if you feel inclined to give it another whirl.

Thanks again.
-Rain
Check out my latest song called Moment
TobinMueller said 761 days ago (October 10th, 2007)
Consumed
"Are you awake and dying to be consumed?" is a great stanza. Really great. Very cool intimate moment captured in such a private, improv manner. Exhausted, full of authentic feeling.
Check out my latest song called Forge A New Life (MJRF)
rainfice said 758 days ago (October 12th, 2007)
thanks
Thank you Tobin. Any time you stop in and leave a mark is good news to me. I'm glad you liked this one. Check out the new version if you want. I think it's an improvement.
Thanks,
-Rain
Check out my latest song called Moment
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