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Fourth Window

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another song from the basement(remixed) looking for your input etc...

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she goes down on a cool Friday night
underneath those Chicago street lights
she makes her living of guys named john
they don't bring her flowers they don't sing her songs
cause she keeps on working

she left home when she reached womanhood
told her family shes of to Hollywood
shes gonna be a big movie star
get her name engraved on the boulevard
cause she keeps on working

she dont know what shes doing anymore
shes got her back up against a wall thats for sure
everybody says she could have been a beauty queen
I just say to myself that will always remain to be seen

she'll never be
what she wanted to be
well never see her on a picture screen

she's all about pleasing her man
he returns the favour with a back hand
after all this is her roll
she plays her part so dam cold
cause she keeps on working

Song Stats

Hits: 1025
Comments: 28
Fans: 18
Plays: 77
Downloads: 2
Votes: 8
Uploaded: Jan 06, 2008 - 02:13:17 PM
Last Updated: Apr 04, 2008 - 08:43:53 PM Last Played: Aug 04, 2009 - 02:10:57 AM

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Estella	Estella said 673 days ago (January 6th, 2008)
	fourth window I like the drums--the energy you've created. You are a great guitarist! Poetic user name: "fourth window". Check out my latest song called Este Momento

Fourth Window	Fourth Window said 673 days ago (January 6th, 2008)
	thanks we thank for your thoughts Check out my latest song called Waking Up In Reno

craft	craft said 673 days ago (January 6th, 2008)
	cool song Keep rockin... Nicely performed.. Great guitar playing Check out my latest song called Blue Lights (feat. Spleenveil)

echoroom	echoroom said 673 days ago (January 6th, 2008)
	Romantic song... ... about the oldest profession, yes? Overall nice sound, the drums push this baby along. For me there's a little too much fx on the vox (sounds chorused), but otherwise this works great, with a nice structure. Good work guys Check out my latest song called Deeper (w/t Racerat)

Fourth Window

Fourth Window said 673 days ago (January 6th, 2008)

song about
its actually about this girl who used to baby sit my kid then later on in life she became a stripper and the a hooker
were she was eventually killed by a john in Niagara falls Canada she would always talk about being a movie star etc... that's were the song idea originated from there is a little chorus on the voice we put in afterward

Check out my latest song called Waking Up In Reno

bud	bud said 673 days ago (January 6th, 2008)
	I agree with Steve about the vocal effects The song is very well played and structured - but it feels a little long to me for some reason - I guess I feel like the subject could use a rougher edge that gets in and out faster (pardon the pun). Check out my latest song called Expanding Toys (Halloween Remix)

Fourth Window

Fourth Window said 673 days ago (January 6th, 2008)

thanks
were not sure what you mean by it seems long after all should nt a song be as long at it needs to be when telling a story
or do you just follow the the old standard lets make a 2 min song vs chorus vs bridge chorus, that has always confussed us just as much as song labels ie rock grunge etc...... sorry if it seems long but it feels good for us

Check out my latest song called Waking Up In Reno

Feter	Feter said 673 days ago (January 6th, 2008)
	Picture Screen Great rockin and singin my friend !! Check out my latest song called A Night With Feter feat'(Roxylee sloparts crissew johnwhitehead and Yamin AL Yamani )

dajama	dajama said 672 days ago (January 7th, 2008)
	Nice song Love the rolling, pushing rhythm - it moves along with great verve and energy. The story is sad, but well told, with good turns of phrase and some nice imagery. I like the guitar sound (and the playing!), and the vocals have feeling and depth. Glad to see you back! I look forward to some more new stuff soon. Nice work. Peace. Check out my latest song called Across the Wire (MJRF)

Fourth Window	Fourth Window said 672 days ago (January 7th, 2008)
	thanks for the input we value it very much Check out my latest song called Waking Up In Reno

8piscean8	8piscean8 said 672 days ago (January 7th, 2008)
	Sweet Great Lyrics. Very Beatlesque in some parts. I would like to hear more kick drum. The snare comes through pretty well but the kick sounds like a lower tuned tom or something. The guitar playing and the vocals are great. Great work, bring up the kick and it will be even more of a driving beat! Check out my latest song called The End

racerat	racerat said 672 days ago (January 7th, 2008)
	70's It's got a real 70's garage band kind of feel for me. The guitars are very warm in an analogue kind of way. I actually like all the effects on the vocals, they give the song an anthem, concert kind of sound. The guitar work is really nice. Good stuff! Check out my latest song called Frank's Song

Fourth Window	Fourth Window said 672 days ago (January 7th, 2008)
	hey man thank alot we love your input as we have listen to your songs and man you know what your doing Check out my latest song called Waking Up In Reno

freefalleffect	freefalleffect said 672 days ago (January 7th, 2008)
	kinda like the replacements or camper van bethoven....well written pop rock tune....my only suggestion would be live drums please....but other than that nive work...keep it up and up peace Check out my latest song called Redemption

Fourth Window	Fourth Window said 671 days ago (January 8th, 2008)
	why are asking to do drums for us lol Check out my latest song called Waking Up In Reno

davisamerica	davisamerica said 668 days ago (January 11th, 2008)
	right then i love this tune....and play drums..lol nice rocker! Check out my latest song called No Son(egobandit band)

	said 672 days ago (January 7th, 2008)
	big step in the right direction. you guys are progressing with every song. keep it up, pun not intended.....

droop	droop said 671 days ago (January 8th, 2008)
	Really like your voice! Great playing, great song....very well structured. Check out my latest song called Last Teardrop

	said 671 days ago (January 8th, 2008)
	good rockin the drums sound real?I think the harmony parts could have been applied more. overall a good song

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damiengh said 671 days ago (January 8th, 2008)

yes
Cool construction.

Enough variety in your sections to hold interest all the way through, especially in how you used your guitars.

Effective use of your background vocals and guitar which paraphrases some of the vocal lines. Also liked your guitars independent lines coming in at just the right places.

You got some good ideas here that work, period.

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lavalamp	lavalamp said 670 days ago (January 9th, 2008)
	Oh Cananda Catchy song. Straight forward rock song with riffs. Dug this one a lot. I'll have to check out more of your stuff. Good singing! LL Check out my latest song called Googolplex Times Zero

J.A.Stewart	J.A.Stewart said 669 days ago (January 9th, 2008)
	Turnabout Trick-Turner Interesting tale. The lead vocal reminds me a bit of Roger Daltrey. Kidnap a terrific, slightly crazy drummer... give this tune a bit harder edge... and you'll have a curious Who tune. lol A very good arrangement and production. Nicely done, guys. ;) --- Joe Check out my latest song called A Night @ Neverland

alexweiler	alexweiler said 668 days ago (January 11th, 2008)
	Well done Thanks for your invitation ... a really nice piece of Classic Rock and I really like your guitar play, too. It sounds all round, but I personally would like to have the mix be a bit heavier (as I am used to listen to harder rock music) and perhaps the drums could benefit from more variation. Check out my latest song called Roaming (Heavy Remix)

TobinMueller

TobinMueller said 668 days ago (January 11th, 2008)

Cymbal variations
Lots of great things to say about this. Very nice clarity, energy, vocals. The part that detracts is the usage of cymbals and the load ride. Consider varying the ride to make it sound more human and to place cymbal hits off the accents instead of on. MIDI cymbals can grate when used on the beat. Also, using different cymbals to create a sense of variation might help. Really nice track.

Check out my latest song called Forge A New Life (MJRF)

bonnieprincejohnny	bonnieprincejohnny said 668 days ago (January 11th, 2008)
	WORK IT. Excellent voice - tired lyric... fab production y guittarra. Be calm. Check out my latest song called twenty seven

rtcooper	rtcooper said 667 days ago (January 12th, 2008)
	NICE TOUCH Gtrs and Vocals are Pro. Great Capture. Mix is clean and restrained with good balance. Could have handled more gain on the lead guitar, but, as we know, I'm hard of hearing! Check out my latest song called Intimate Anyway

	tinytime said 664 days ago (January 14th, 2008)
	well well done like this alot

	said 541 days ago (May 17th, 2008)
	Cool! Very nice work, lovely guitar work and fine vocals. Really nice piece of work... The guitar tone is cool! Take Care - Yeman A. Al-Rawi

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