emma [revised]

davisamerica

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There was a recent forum post on what was your favorite "previously posted" song. Emma, is still one of my all time favorites. It was the first tune i finally got "panning"... thank you Jo. I thought I had lost this tune but found the rough work copy while re organizing my hard drive. I tried to reconstruct it as closely to the original as possible. I hope all will be forgiven for re posting ... but then Emma has always had a mind of her own.
Jack

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Emma
[ a love song ]

Emma is sleeping
But I will not wake her
Will not tell her
The things that I know

So close now
What is she dreaming
Her eyes move about
All the places she goes

My love
Emma my darling
You say
I worry you still
I think
You are mistaken
Emma
Who did you kill?

Emma in back doors
In alleys and places
I follow behind
To keep her concealed

How did it happen
That she's come this far from
The Emma who loved me
Who touched and could feel?

My love
Emma my darling
You say
I worry you still
I think
You are mistaken
Emma

.... it's ok ... you can sleep

Some early morning
They're going to find you
I'll have my head turned
And you'll be gone

In the meantime
I'll follow you closely
To see you are safe
I know this is wrong

My love
Emma my darling
You say
I worry you still
I think
You are mistaken
Emma

....awake .... Emma are you awake?

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Hits: 1887
Comments: 110
Fans: 56
Plays: 192
Downloads: 102
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Uploaded: Apr 06, 2008 - 10:26:15 AM
Last Updated: Sep 21, 2009 - 08:53:50 PM Last Played: Oct 25, 2009 - 05:28:39 AM

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Go_Turtle_Go

Go_Turtle_Go said 581 days ago (April 6th, 2008)

sigh! :-)
A very, very fine piece of music. An adventure in sonic haute cuisine, in style, in unexplainable desires and emotions and about dangerous women! Beautiful execution; awesome layering, chord progressions, instrument changes and overall length of the piece. I am, to be honest, a bit astounded. And, to be honest, I haven't heard such a good tune for quite some time. Well, at least in this mysterious genre. Jack, you the man.
Marc

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davisamerica	davisamerica said 580 days ago (April 7th, 2008)
	well marc lol ... what can i say .. am speechless right now cos i thought you were the man. pretty head inflating comments from such a great producer of killer sounds ... wow .. am sure emma's little tools will deflate this feeling soon but for now ... thank you marc! Check out my latest song called No Son(egobandit band)

rsorensen	rsorensen said 581 days ago (April 6th, 2008)
	really cool track love the distant vibe of this and the instrumentation and structure is outstanding. well done Check out my latest song called You Are My Whole Life

davisamerica	davisamerica said 580 days ago (April 7th, 2008)
	right then thank you ... very cool to see you took a listen man Check out my latest song called No Son(egobandit band)

Lenny Zero	Lenny Zero said 581 days ago (April 6th, 2008)
	This has.. ... a real 60's feel to it with the guitar and treated vocal. The vocal effect is great (what did you use?). This has moments of tension but uses the gentle waltz time to great effect. Excellent track. Check out my latest song called Wrapped in Plastic

davisamerica	davisamerica said 580 days ago (April 7th, 2008)
	vocals... megaphone ... cos ... well cos i am not very comfortable with doing vocals ... terry [davis2] usually does that heavy lifting ... thanks lenny! Check out my latest song called No Son(egobandit band)

Feter	Feter said 581 days ago (April 6th, 2008)
	emma as I said before ...a true master piece ..Kudos bro ! Check out my latest song called A Night With Feter feat'(Roxylee sloparts crissew johnwhitehead and Yamin AL Yamani )

davisamerica	davisamerica said 580 days ago (April 7th, 2008)
	feter my brother you are just always there to rally me on .... that means the world to me ... thank you my friend Check out my latest song called No Son(egobandit band)

racerat	racerat said 581 days ago (April 6th, 2008)
	Classical This has a very 70's Pink Floyd, Jethro Tull, theme album vibe to it, while still being completely original and engaging. Romantically sweeping and tender track. I can see why it has stuck with you. DL'd and fav'd. P Check out my latest song called Frank's Song

davisamerica	davisamerica said 580 days ago (April 7th, 2008)
	hello phillip well thanks man ... just checked out your new collab with echo [steve] ... man you guys just nail it down .... anyroad ... thanks for the listen Check out my latest song called No Son(egobandit band)

davisamerica2	davisamerica2 said 581 days ago (April 6th, 2008)
	You know those novels...... that you can't put down, and when you finally do, it stays in your mind long afterwards. That's what this song does to me. All your stuff is a unique adventure. Never a disappointment. Well done, Jack. Check out my latest song called It's Lonely Here

davisamerica	davisamerica said 580 days ago (April 7th, 2008)
	lol terry a unique adventure to wacky land i would say ... you are amazing and have taught me much over the years ... and u r also a bit too kind! Check out my latest song called No Son(egobandit band)

MarkHolbrook	MarkHolbrook said 581 days ago (April 6th, 2008)
	As always... Excellent! Thanks DavisA!!! Check out my latest song called Never Say Goodbye - Bond Challenge

davisamerica	davisamerica said 580 days ago (April 7th, 2008)
	right then thanks mark! Check out my latest song called No Son(egobandit band)

	said 581 days ago (April 6th, 2008)
	Right Jack emma Nice one. Another excellent song from the one and only ( love your voice) davisamerica Peace Dee

davisamerica	davisamerica said 580 days ago (April 7th, 2008)
	lol dee you just make me smile ... you are every where ... thank you dee .. alot Check out my latest song called No Son(egobandit band)

magnatone	magnatone said 581 days ago (April 6th, 2008)
	Emma Jack, I love this. So glad you dug it back out of the drawer, I think it's one of my faves of yours also! Beautiful environment, so well produced. thanks! Check out my latest song called Symphonic Smackdown

davisamerica	davisamerica said 580 days ago (April 7th, 2008)
	karen i love seeing your face on a comment box ... always so kind ... thanks lady Check out my latest song called No Son(egobandit band)

jiguma	jiguma said 581 days ago (April 6th, 2008)
	Very nicely done Jack! You've done a great job on the instrumentation in particular - nice big, round bass which doesn't get in the way of the rest of the band. Vocals work really well too - a really good post. Neil Check out my latest song called Under My Skin

davisamerica	davisamerica said 580 days ago (April 7th, 2008)
	hello neil man .... u just made my day ... thank you Check out my latest song called No Son(egobandit band)

drakonis

drakonis said 581 days ago (April 6th, 2008)

a twisted affair
as lives torque slowly away and out of control... what a nightmare. What wonderful lyrics, exquisitely disturbing music, so beautiful, so wrong. There are parts of the orchestration I would suggest could be a little clearer (at 1:50 and 2:02, about), there are some dissonances that need to stand out a little more, for now they're muddy and almost lost (perhaps a different instrument or move it up/down an octave to make it more pronounced.) But the music writing here is excellent, gorgeous melody and chords, taking us on a twisted journey. Great singing and story telling, love the whispers. Chilling.

ttfn,
Drakonis

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davisamerica

davisamerica said 580 days ago (April 7th, 2008)

hell0 drak
i am very blown away by your kind comments ... can hear the parts you are talking about now on speakers ... i mixed with headphones ... always a toss up and gamble ... the work mix i had offered some challenges as well ... but then emma was pretty insistent about being released into the world again ... she can be very persuasive. thanks for the listen eduard

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bud	bud said 581 days ago (April 6th, 2008)
	I remember this - this is where I realized that your writing rose above the normal range of rock and folk and lived somewhere in the higher realm of Burt Bacharach and Kurt Weill. Great tune. Check out my latest song called Expanding Toys (Halloween Remix)

davisamerica	davisamerica said 580 days ago (April 7th, 2008)
	hmmmm lol .... thanks for the comments bud ... check's in the mail Check out my latest song called No Son(egobandit band)

gail60	gail60 said 581 days ago (April 6th, 2008)
	Yes Emma! This is one of my favorites of yours. Something about this song gives me the chills each time I hear it and I always enjoy it more each time. I really do love it! Wonderful job. Love your deep voice...also a favorite of mine :) Great song Jack. Check out my latest song called Sweet September

davisamerica	davisamerica said 580 days ago (April 7th, 2008)
	hello gail u shall make me smile if u don't quit it ... lol ... thanks from a true fan of yours ... but u know that ..yes? Check out my latest song called No Son(egobandit band)

springclock	springclock said 581 days ago (April 6th, 2008)
	whimsy and gloom but the best kind....like a charming nightmare.... love the tones and distance that pours forth in the reverb.... very intimate and playful....you paint the story in the lyric perfectly.... love how the instruments move in and out of the mix....here there and beyond....one of my favs in a while here at MJ....way cool Check out my latest song called 150cc (Final Version)

davisamerica	davisamerica said 581 days ago (April 6th, 2008)
	wow springclock one of my first favs and ... wow ... thanks Check out my latest song called No Son(egobandit band)

Go_Turtle_Go	Go_Turtle_Go said 580 days ago (April 7th, 2008)
	:-P you see Jack! Even though I am occasionally guilty of the inflation of meaning (great, fantastic, etc). I truly meant what I said. Your song and you deserve the no 1 slot imnho. Marc Check out my latest song called Booga Sugar (ft. Beans) final mix

davisamerica	davisamerica said 580 days ago (April 7th, 2008)
	hello again marc man u cool turtle you ... how did i get so lucky to find a friend like this ... dunno why ... but dig it ...thanks bro Check out my latest song called No Son(egobandit band)

Godchaser	Godchaser said 581 days ago (April 6th, 2008)
	Emma With your clever use of instruments,your deep stirring vocals and strong lyrical content,this piece creates such a vivid and dark scene.I love when a song can paint such a clear picture,even if it is a fright filled one.Very,very well done Jack. Daniel Check out my latest song called As i Walk

davisamerica	davisamerica said 580 days ago (April 7th, 2008)
	hi daniel pretty nice comments from you my friend ... emma gives me the chills ..lol .. daniel i always love seeing you take time for a listen ... very much respect your opinions and your own talent ... so thank you very much gentle brother ... thank you Check out my latest song called No Son(egobandit band)

	said 580 days ago (April 7th, 2008)
	Lurking... in the shadows is the vibe I'm getting. The instrument choices fit extremely well together. Never heard the first post, but I'm impressed to say the least with this one. Nice job Jack. Fav and downloaded. Chris

davisamerica	davisamerica said 580 days ago (April 7th, 2008)
	man chris do u know how much i love your screaming guitar work .... doubt it but i do and that makes ur comments even better. thanks man Check out my latest song called No Son(egobandit band)

apb

apb said 580 days ago (April 7th, 2008)

I love this ..

.. for me it has a nice Strangler's vibe with the instrumentation .. and I love that. Way cool .. and lovely remix .. stereo field is sweet now...excellent vocals/delivery, lovely guitar, great build with the orchestration ..and I love the blend of the modern synths with classic organs and harpsichord like keys... faved and downloaded.

Awesome, creepy vibe really matches the subject matter...right then .. where did the old version go for comparison Jack? lol

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davisamerica	davisamerica said 580 days ago (April 7th, 2008)
	lol alan and think i will keep the work copy close to the vest ... this one seems to be working ok ... wow man ... u are a golden post comment to me every time ... so respect ur opinion and advice ... always have. thanks alan ... am smiling Check out my latest song called No Son(egobandit band)

	said 580 days ago (April 7th, 2008)
	Spaces I like the simulated spaces in this production as well as the restrained drama, very nice song!

davisamerica	davisamerica said 580 days ago (April 7th, 2008)
	hello tom ... and wow .... thanks man ..... thank you very much! Check out my latest song called No Son(egobandit band)

ktb	ktb said 579 days ago (April 8th, 2008)
	wow this is astonishing in its creativity and production. The vocal effect was nicely done, and the orchestration is brilliant. Check out my latest song called off the deck (w/Z293)

davisamerica	davisamerica said 579 days ago (April 8th, 2008)
	right then KTB thank you for the comment and just taking the time to listen is an amazing gift. emma is what she is and she just moved in. i think i may have just gotten simply lucky ... but you are very kind and much appreciate your time! Check out my latest song called No Son(egobandit band)

	said 579 days ago (April 8th, 2008)
	Classic! Yes, this was one of my faves by you as well. You've taken a great tune here and made a better my friend. Well done, well done! Take care Jack!

davisamerica	davisamerica said 579 days ago (April 8th, 2008)
	hello michael lol..... remember what ur comment was? hehe i do "finally your vox is upfront and center where it belongs" ... i tened to record to the left as u rec all ... pre panning daze! Then as now you are a great friend and thanks for the listen brother! Check out my latest song called No Son(egobandit band)

Heightened	Heightened said 579 days ago (April 8th, 2008)
	Ultra cool! This is a pretty well as good as it gets on either iComps or MacJams. Wonderfully original and excellently produced. Check out my latest song called A Journey Through Starburst Galaxy M82

davisamerica	davisamerica said 579 days ago (April 8th, 2008)
	hello H lol ... do believe u got an edge on this with your latest work my friend ... thanks man ... you are always the best Check out my latest song called No Son(egobandit band)

dirigent	dirigent said 578 days ago (April 9th, 2008)
	Emma great piece of soundart, love the choice of instruments :-) Check out my latest song called Autumn

davisamerica	davisamerica said 578 days ago (April 9th, 2008)
	andreas thank you ... much appreciated ... have begun to surf your catalogue recently and wow!! thanks alot! Check out my latest song called No Son(egobandit band)

Pete_NB

Pete_NB said 578 days ago (April 9th, 2008)

Clever
There are lots of very smart things going on here. The music perfectly catches the mood of the lyrics. It's downright creepy!

The quick flourish of notes after the "...you can sleep" break gives me goosebumps. The choice of instrumentation is perfect as well, putting me in mind of that sinister carnival music from that creepy Roald Dahl "Tales of the Unexpected" show. Emma would have loved that show I bet!

If the song doesn't topple the listener's psyche, the perfectly inflected whisper at the end is the coup de grace. Stellar!

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davisamerica	davisamerica said 578 days ago (April 9th, 2008)
	lol pete and way cool cos i like the whispering bit best! thanks man! Check out my latest song called No Son(egobandit band)

	said 578 days ago (April 9th, 2008)
	yes This is good. Has a nostalgic feel to it. How is that possible? Like out of a 70s British romance movie. You rock softly.

davisamerica	davisamerica said 578 days ago (April 9th, 2008)
	so... 70's british thing ... is ok right? right then .. richard u rock and thanks ... funniest guy on MJ ...IMHO Check out my latest song called No Son(egobandit band)

	said 578 days ago (April 9th, 2008)
	Hey now I love that 70s era...and stretching back to the late 50s. I belong there. Never got to go to London, see. Or Germany, or Lebanon, or Canada, or Switzerland. I travel vicariously. Wait, this song is not about me. It's about Public Emma No. 1.

davisamerica	davisamerica said 577 days ago (April 10th, 2008)
	lol again richard you crack me up indeed! Check out my latest song called No Son(egobandit band)

thetiler	thetiler said 578 days ago (April 9th, 2008)
	I think this is the best one I've heard you do this is highly creative. Love the merry go round, dark sound you crafted. Pretty darn inventive da! Such a spectrum of intense drama and the lists goes on! Very impressed with this. Check out my latest song called The Bluebird Cafe (with two other guest)

davisamerica	davisamerica said 578 days ago (April 9th, 2008)
	wow bill i am truly speechless ... thank you ... no ... really.... thank you Check out my latest song called No Son(egobandit band)

Bob Rodgers	Bob Rodgers said 577 days ago (April 10th, 2008)
	A great piece of music, I love the lyrics and so well sung with a great vocal sound, everything sounds great, superb!! Check out my latest song called In My Mind

davisamerica	davisamerica said 576 days ago (April 11th, 2008)
	great to see u bob very nice indeed .... comments always just amazingly kind ... thanks man Check out my latest song called No Son(egobandit band)

said 577 days ago (April 10th, 2008)

thumbs UP
really cool concept! 3/4 - mmmmm, my favorite.
sweet delicate guitar in left ear, nicely spaced panned right sounds.
and a wholebuncha other stuff in between mixed very nicely.
i like the effect on the very good vocal - that distance lends such a strong flavor to the whole shebang. i really enjoyed your singing.
mmmmm - that end was perfect. this is a little like cohen on caffeine.
what a Good Song! jack, you ARE the man.
great job - anne

davisamerica	davisamerica said 576 days ago (April 11th, 2008)
	gulp ... i'm dying right ... somehow you have talked to my doctor and learned a secret and now you are trying to make my last days special ... right ...??? wow anne, thank you ...WOOZERS ..lol Check out my latest song called No Son(egobandit band)

lengold	lengold said 576 days ago (April 11th, 2008)
	Sorry I'm so late to this Jack Jack - I love this song - listened to it many times. I rank it as one of the very best I have ever heard on here or anywhere else. Cheers Len Check out my latest song called Dodgy Doughnut

davisamerica	davisamerica said 576 days ago (April 11th, 2008)
	hello len! you are never late ... just right on time .. and yeah you have always made me feel good about this tune from the first ... thanks for a listen to this revision .. too cool u r Check out my latest song called No Son(egobandit band)

ageofthedeathtree	ageofthedeathtree said 576 days ago (April 11th, 2008)
	WOW! this is a GREAT tune! i'm loving every aspect of it...extremely creative and so full of mood and atmosphere! very well done...hats off! age Check out my latest song called Apocalypse Eyes (Sons of Hypnos)

davisamerica	davisamerica said 576 days ago (April 11th, 2008)
	wow age man thank you Check out my latest song called No Son(egobandit band)

*itiswotitis*	*itiswotitis* said 576 days ago (April 11th, 2008)
	Glad You put this uup again.. i love this song! Check out my latest song called WALKING BASS IN THE CLOUDS

davisamerica	davisamerica said 576 days ago (April 11th, 2008)
	lol jo so do u remember it was u who told me about panning previous to this original post??? well it was ... and i thank u ... thanks lady Check out my latest song called No Son(egobandit band)

egobandit	egobandit said 576 days ago (April 11th, 2008)
	An Experience Filled with tom fooler ieee But that s ok because its a forbidden love . So then the wish is this! Enjoyed! Excellent Im bowing twice Check out my latest song called So I been told

davisamerica	davisamerica said 576 days ago (April 11th, 2008)
	wow tim thankx me thinks ...lol... naw man u rock and thank you Check out my latest song called No Son(egobandit band)

davisamerica	davisamerica said 576 days ago (April 11th, 2008)
	emma lol Check out my latest song called No Son(egobandit band)

Alannah

Alannah said 576 days ago (April 11th, 2008)

wow ...
.. this is so interestingly different .... I liked the Megaphone effect on the vocals .. but still feel you could have used the megaphone and cranked the reverb a tad to reflect the depth and deepness of your male sound (did that come out sounding creepy???) .... it might have given it that tad more richness .. while also maintaining the hollow feel of the megaphone .... luvved the tune !

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davisamerica

davisamerica said 575 days ago (April 12th, 2008)

hello alannah
interesting tip on the reverb ... actually re mixed this with a bit of less reverb than the original. i try to hide my voice weakness with effects sometimes .. but then get into too much reverb in general .... guess i should have stayed with original huh?? ..lol .. and you are the best! it is so cool to get artist comments .. the time spent to share them is a gift indeed and much appreciated .. i personally love it! so thanks lady ... thank you very much for the well placed comment!!

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EMP	EMP said 575 days ago (April 12th, 2008)
	Nice track Great vocal on this, nice work. Check out my latest song called FP Tour

davisamerica	davisamerica said 574 days ago (April 13th, 2008)
	hey gary thanks for the listen .... much appreciated! Check out my latest song called No Son(egobandit band)

Doadars Uncle	Doadars Uncle said 573 days ago (April 14th, 2008)
	Hey! Rich frequencies. Crisp depth. Sweet and macabre. Very interesting angle! Check out my latest song called Capitalist's Drag

davisamerica	davisamerica said 573 days ago (April 14th, 2008)
	well hello doug! thanks man ... ur new post is killer ... thanks for the listen! Check out my latest song called No Son(egobandit band)

lavalamp	lavalamp said 572 days ago (April 15th, 2008)
	Remarkable My speakers have never felt so good. They said "play that again." Really outstanding. Not in a commercial way, but in an artistic sense. Very, very good job. LL Check out my latest song called Googolplex Times Zero

davisamerica	davisamerica said 571 days ago (April 16th, 2008)
	wow and hello david thanks for the listen man ... and tell your speakers thanks as well! very cool! Check out my latest song called No Son(egobandit band)

dajama

dajama said 572 days ago (April 15th, 2008)

Wonderful song
Great lyrics - talk about evocative! I'm swept up into a world of strange and illicit love. Very cool. The music is great - lovely changes and excellent use of instrumental color. The organ is a beautiful touch, and the overall haunting vibe is perfectly realized. The effected vocal works well I think. It's the kind of thing that only works on some songs, and this is one of them. Outstanding. Kudos, my friend. Peace.

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davisamerica	davisamerica said 571 days ago (April 16th, 2008)
	right then dave man you always leave the best comments ... thank you so much... appreciated indeed. Check out my latest song called No Son(egobandit band)

Bob6stringer	Bob6stringer said 569 days ago (April 18th, 2008)
	Literary Well-crafted literature set to fitting music with a perfect arrangement. This could have come from the acid Lennon/McBrilliance that spawned Elanor Rigby or some of the Sgt. Pepper tracks. The performance goes deeper than op would allow these days. Check out my latest song called Yours and Mine

davisamerica	davisamerica said 569 days ago (April 18th, 2008)
	hello bob thanks man ... very nice comments and way over my head ..lol very much appreciated ... emma says thank you Check out my latest song called No Son(egobandit band)

MarkHolbrook

MarkHolbrook said 563 days ago (April 24th, 2008)

I make it a point...
to try and re-visit songs from time to time. When I'm not working on one of my own, I'm thinking about people here on MJ and the songs they write.

I realized I needed to do another listen to Emma and I just did. I've downloaded it but it hadn't popped up in iTunes. So I went and found 'er and took another listen.

For me the 2nd or 3rd listen is when the subtle details begin to emerge and Emma certainly was hiding a few I missed on the first pass.

Jack... Amazing work! Beautiful in all aspects! Thank you for making this a download and creating Emma in the first place. A real treasure!

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davisamerica	davisamerica said 563 days ago (April 24th, 2008)
	lol... well thanks and so sez emma ... wow man .... thank you Check out my latest song called No Son(egobandit band)

Mystified	Mystified said 563 days ago (April 24th, 2008)
	Oooh... I really like this! Very nicely done. Really like the treatment of the vox, and the instrumental is rich and backs the story and mood of the lyrics very well. Kudos! :) Check out my latest song called Forever Voyaging (space race 2009)

davisamerica	davisamerica said 563 days ago (April 24th, 2008)
	dang cat... so cool u ... wow thanks ... from emma and me Check out my latest song called No Son(egobandit band)

	said 562 days ago (April 25th, 2008)
	Nice! I remember this piece before. With the remix it sounds much better. You have a great vocal... Wonderful instruments in the background. Great to see new posts from you! KUDOS! Take Care - Yeman A. Al-Rawi

davisamerica	davisamerica said 560 days ago (April 27th, 2008)
	Yemen! mt friend so cool to hear from you again .... thanks for the comments and listen!@ Check out my latest song called No Son(egobandit band)

Nick_Flash	Nick_Flash said 558 days ago (April 29th, 2008)
	Great This is a great arrangement. The effect on the vocal fits perfectly and you sing it so well. Very nice! Check out my latest song called Wake Up

davisamerica	davisamerica said 558 days ago (April 29th, 2008)
	wow nick emma sez hello and thanks ... dunno if that is a good thing or not... Check out my latest song called No Son(egobandit band)

slumbering	slumbering said 543 days ago (May 14th, 2008)
	This is one of my favorite songs on the site At first i thought i was losing my mind because i could have sworn it was in my list of favorites but maybe it is because this is the revised version? And the old version is no longer here? Anyway, it's just chillingly beautiful. Check out my latest song called Over the Sea

davisamerica	davisamerica said 543 days ago (May 14th, 2008)
	wow and u r a surprise .. thank you and emma says thanks as well Check out my latest song called No Son(egobandit band)

shirtless	shirtless said 541 days ago (May 16th, 2008)
	I like Hi, I found this rather haunting, but eerie in its gentle sound. I enjoyed it. Thanks for posting it. regards, shirtless Check out my latest song called CONNECT THE DOTS

davisamerica	davisamerica said 502 days ago (June 24th, 2008)
	hello shirtless well thanks for the listen .. very nice ... ahem ... emma hunts everyone.. Check out my latest song called No Son(egobandit band)

Roxylee

Roxylee said 536 days ago (May 21st, 2008)

Chilling...
and so well done... Wow.. the megaphone effect is perfect for your speaking from a distance, into Emma's dream. The calliope sound instrumentation in the breaks is perfect for this. The subject reminded me of Pavanne, by R&L Thompson, which also gives me chills. The melody and vocals are superb in Emma (such an innocent sounding name, too) ; amazing song writing!

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davisamerica	davisamerica said 536 days ago (May 21st, 2008)
	wow roxy... ... :-] Check out my latest song called No Son(egobandit band)

somebuddy	somebuddy said 429 days ago (September 5th, 2008)
	nice I love the structure and emotion/feeling this song brings. Good job! Check out my latest song called Peter Pan

davisamerica	davisamerica said 427 days ago (September 7th, 2008)
	:-] thanks for the visit .... emma gets lonley Check out my latest song called No Son(egobandit band)

Char	Char said 422 days ago (September 12th, 2008)
	Wow! Jack, this is such great story-telling. So theatrical! So eerie and yet still, familiar. If I wasn't already a fan this would have bowled me over. One amazing talent right here. Woo-hoo! Thank you. Check out my latest song called Do Any Thing

davisamerica	davisamerica said 419 days ago (September 15th, 2008)
	:-] Well thank you Char .... a rising bright star are u! Check out my latest song called No Son(egobandit band)

SmokeyVW	SmokeyVW said 421 days ago (September 13th, 2008)
	real music i'm having a flashback to the 70's - that good stuff they played on album oriented FM radio stations... it could be one of those sunday morning 4 AM kinda situations... i like the chord progressions and melody the best. no, wait, the lyrics no, it's all great thanks Check out my latest song called Settle

davisamerica	davisamerica said 419 days ago (September 15th, 2008)
	wow Bill What a wonderful comment ... and from you ... this means a lot! Check out my latest song called No Son(egobandit band)

morningcup	morningcup said 408 days ago (September 26th, 2008)
	mysterious and haunting... I love this... only hints leading to what this may be about... a surreal painting surely.. love it Check out my latest song called 908

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MarkHolbrook said 363 days ago (November 10th, 2008)

Just me Jack...
I'm back... This is one of my favorites of all time. I have it set to 5 stars in the iPod and often it pops up and I just start singing with it.

This is marvelous, mysterious, fantastic and it makes me smile whenever I hear it.

Oh God how I wished I had wrote this! This is simply great! Thanks for sharing this... Thanks again!

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MarkHolbrook	MarkHolbrook said 338 days ago (December 5th, 2008)
	Sorry... Just can't get enough! I added this to the best of 2008 post because it is one of the best... If not the best of 2008! Way to go Jack!!! Way to go! Check out my latest song called Never Say Goodbye - Bond Challenge

davisamerica	davisamerica said 322 days ago (December 21st, 2008)
	Mr. Holbrook Becoming close friends has been a high point for me this year ... all the best to you mark Check out my latest song called No Son(egobandit band)

Youra	Youra said 309 days ago (January 3rd, 2009)
	One more I'm just discovering this fantastic song. I could'nt do less than adding my name to the long list of its fans. Probably one the best songs I never heard around. Check out my latest song called Funkaboka

davisamerica	davisamerica said 309 days ago (January 3rd, 2009)
	youra thanks ... will return the favor ... much appreciated ! Check out my latest song called No Son(egobandit band)

haribo	haribo said 193 days ago (April 29th, 2009)
	sentimental beautiful, sentimental, cinematic, french and evocative are the words i come up with this has the sort of rich depth of the 80's music! but still in a modern fashion.. thanks for creating & sharing this track Check out my latest song called Fragment

davisamerica	davisamerica said 144 days ago (June 17th, 2009)
	haribo appreciate the listen ... i am a fan of yours. Check out my latest song called No Son(egobandit band)

Char	Char said 193 days ago (April 29th, 2009)
	Came back to once again, enjoy the warmth and the mystery of davisamerica's story telling in song. Love that melody and I could listen to you sing over and over and find new inflection to delight in. You are a dream weaver. Thanks. Check out my latest song called Do Any Thing

davisamerica	davisamerica said 144 days ago (June 17th, 2009)
	my dear char .... thanks!! Check out my latest song called No Son(egobandit band)

kassia	kassia said 145 days ago (June 16th, 2009)
	oh jack you just blow my mind each and every time. a masterpiece. Check out my latest song called World of Wonders

davisamerica	davisamerica said 144 days ago (June 17th, 2009)
	shay .... i am touched you would visit. I am stunned by your very kind comments. I consider you a very dear friend ... thanks ... a lot! Check out my latest song called No Son(egobandit band)

MarkHolbrook	MarkHolbrook said 22 days ago (October 17th, 2009)
	I'm back! I can't believe you considered this "rough" "work copy"... Gosh Jack... this is stunningly beautiful! Check out my latest song called Never Say Goodbye - Bond Challenge

Halloween-2009-Challenge	Halloween-2009-Challenge said 22 days ago (October 17th, 2009)
	This is not a well person I can see now why she belongs here among us, she's here to thin out the weak ones. Ha ha ha ha ha hahahaha

davisamerica	davisamerica said 21 days ago (October 18th, 2009)
	she is what she is ..... and she sends her thanks..... and maybe a visit later ..... Check out my latest song called No Son(egobandit band)

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