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My son is now the age I was when I wrote this poem and I see the same darkness that I felt way back when...but honestly I'm much better now...hopefully so will he be! Anyway, its funny how I can remember this after all the years. And if nothing else, its short. I resisted the urge to make the voice deeper and more effective since its mine.
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I know a place where shadows bloom
Flowers die and rot
Babies leave their hollow wombs
Existence is their lot
Their faces blank, unwritten pages
Free of social ink
are marred by pens of so-called sages
who tell them what to think
With best intent we steal their souls
Their hollow bodies grieve
They live in chains without parole
Til death grants its reprieve
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Uploaded: Apr 15, 2008 - 08:00:26 PM
Last Updated: Apr 15, 2008 - 08:00:26 PM Last Played: Oct 29, 2009 - 05:49:18 PM
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Hardware:
Imac G4 1Ghz, Edirol PCR-30 keyboard
Software:
Garageband, Guitar hero...ok maybe not
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said 572 days ago (April 15th, 2008)
Grade A gray day
Yes. Nice ambient introspection. You have a pleasant speaking voice. An affirmation of necessary youthful darkness. I experienced similar shades of gray.
oldlibmike said 572 days ago (April 15th, 2008)
Humbling!
I'm flattered for your listening! You've produced volumes of great material here which I've enjoyed. I'm actually a fairly optimistic person these days, ironically! But you are only 19 once..thank god!
Check out my latest song called Lama du jour
said 572 days ago (April 15th, 2008)
This is good.

Wow I love your voice its sounds really clear and fascinating actually.
I tried to write you a note back in reply to yours about my new pic Egyptian!! and guess what. My connection got broke. I had to restart
and lost the reply. Never mind I am here now ha ha.
You spoke it wonderfully. I am impressed. also a very poignant poem.
Peace Dee.

oldlibmike said 572 days ago (April 15th, 2008)
Thanks for the listen
This is an atypical piece for me actually. Most of my vocals are modified and with some effects I can pull off James Earl Jones :)

But in the end I took most of the effects off since this was a bit of a personal piece.
Check out my latest song called Lama du jour
Doadars Uncle said 572 days ago (April 16th, 2008)
Cool!
Very cool. Who can teach?

Nice presentation!
Check out my latest song called Capitalist's Drag
dajama said 566 days ago (April 21st, 2008)
Very cool
Sounds like a familiar place, especially at that age. Great poetry, and you wrap it in some great sounds here. Your voice works very well too. I think you got it right. An effected vocal would not have been as effective. Very cool. Nicely done. Peace.
Check out my latest song called Across the Wire (MJRF)
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Got into MIDI with an early Soundblaster AWE-32 and Cakewalk and later rediscovered with my Apple and Garageband. Musical influences in no particular order: Steely Dan, Jefferson Airplane, Grateful Dead, Beatles, JeanMichel Jarre, Kraftwerk, Brian E... [see more]

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