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| edpdx said 532 days ago (May 26th, 2008) | |
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Hey Thanks!! I REALLY appreciate your constructive feedback. I had no idea about the volume on the 'chuff', will tone it down and on the distortion. I will give it a look-see. I am currently working on the second part and should have the new version posted soon. Your suggestions have really helped me to focus on what the piece needs. Again, really appreciate it and thank you for the warm welcome! Edpdx Check out my latest song called Constellation V.2
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| said 531 days ago (May 27th, 2008) | |
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Cool! I like the way you use that loop for your percussion. That sounds unique. Would love to hear more. C. |
| said 531 days ago (May 27th, 2008) | |
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Space Voyage. Carry on with this. It sounds gorgous, Love 'Space' ones. |
| edpdx said 531 days ago (May 28th, 2008) | |
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Thanks! I am trilled to be a part of this community and looking forward to learning more about music production. Thank you drakonis, chris and dee1962z Check out my latest song called Constellation V.2
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| VicDiesel said 517 days ago (June 10th, 2008) | |
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Voyage cut short? Hey, this starts really promising. Please make it longer. I'll disagree with Drakonis about the chugging sounds: on speakers it's not obnoxious at all. In general I like the sounds you're using. That vocal sample in particular is really sweet. Check out my latest song called Pipe Spring at Dusk
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| edpdx said 516 days ago (June 11th, 2008) | |
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Thanks for the comment! VicDiesel, I appreciate your feedback. I been very busy and it is taken me a while to try to finish this song. I think I will ad more "Vocals" to it and make it longer. Hope to finish it soon. Thanks again. Ed Check out my latest song called Constellation V.2
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| Peter Bauckham said 515 days ago (June 12th, 2008) | |
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Welcome! A very promising start - does have a really spacey sound. Look forward to hearing how you continue with it - I like it so far! Anyway, welcome to MacJams - this is the best place on the internet! Peter Check out my latest song called All The Same (CBGB) (Last Chance Challenge)
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| edpdx said 515 days ago (June 13th, 2008) | |
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Thank you I appreciate your comments peter and thank you for the welcome. I am currently working on finishing it. Cheers! Ed Check out my latest song called Constellation V.2
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| Heightened said 515 days ago (June 12th, 2008) | |
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Cool But again kind of on the short side. Check out my latest song called A Journey Through Starburst Galaxy M82
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| edpdx said 515 days ago (June 13th, 2008) | |
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Space Voyage! Thank you for listening Heightened. Konbanwa! Ed Check out my latest song called Constellation V.2
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drakonis
it does sound sort of spacey. You asked for suggestions... perhaps, if this is a space ride, that low "chuff-chuff-chuff..." sound that shows up in the piece, could be softened a bit (it is really loud in headphones), and used as sort of an "engine-thrust" sound to rhythmically propel the listener through the piece... just let it slowly build and fade across the whole length of the piece, and never let it get too loud. There's some crackly distortion at the very beginning, you may have some tracks going into the red? I like the vox-melody... maybe give this whole thing a teeny bit of echo, to make it more spacious. And of course, come up with a second part and alternate between this and the second part to make the whole thing longer without getting too repetitious. Those are some random ideas. Give them a try. And welcome to Macjams!
ttfn,
Drakonis