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2nd version, added elements. comments and feedback appreciated.
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| PrototypeEightyOne said 369 days ago (November 5th, 2008) | |
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yo thanks tracy, it still is a little rough around the edges, and needs some work but thanks i appreciate that. i like how its sounding so far. intros raw. sorry to hear your havin such a rough day.. Hopefully it settles down for you! Check out my latest song called Planet of Prototypes (mj space race 2009)
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| TracyVosh said 368 days ago (November 6th, 2008) | |
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Thank you... Thank you for your kind words and concern. That alone helps relieve the stress! Check out my latest song called Octopus
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| Konscious said 369 days ago (November 5th, 2008) | |
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cool i like the added elements indeed, so far sounds good, i like the vibe of this one Check out my latest song called Sense of Crisis
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| PrototypeEightyOne said 368 days ago (November 5th, 2008) | |
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yo thanks Kon i wasnt sure about the added parts in the verse. perticularly the synth that plays the quick 2 notes. im still not sure if it suits the feel of the track. Im going to experiment more with it tonight. Check out my latest song called Planet of Prototypes (mj space race 2009)
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| EEFliess said 361 days ago (November 13th, 2008) | |
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nice ambiance now my 2 cents...the percussion is a little on the tinny, treble-ish side, it (in my opinion) needs to go down a hair and the harpsichord and vox elements need upped a little...if you have a primary instrument here, and I am guessing (and I may be wrong) that it would be a combination of the keyboard and vox elements, everything else (bass, drums, rhythm section) can fill in the gaps sounding their best with a slightly lower volume...one criticism that I got in the past that I am addressing is my stuff audibly being a wall of sound, in other words, too much volume all at once...Overall a great little ambient piece, keep 'em coming! Check out my latest song called Aftershock
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| PrototypeEightyOne said 361 days ago (November 13th, 2008) | |
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yo lol u had to pick the pick the most random incomplete track on my list to crit huh :P just playin, ive only put 2 hrs into this and posted it for that exact purpose.. thanks for taking the time and breaking this down. i agree on all counts, and will take it back to the lab..thanks eeeflies. Check out my latest song called Planet of Prototypes (mj space race 2009)
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I like both versions of them. It's very hypnotic and a soothing antidote to a rough day.