Genre: Acoustic Rock
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My attempt at a ballad.Lyrics:
Free YourselfBy Sean O'Malley (c) 2008 Your head is swimming in a darkened sea no make believe has felt so real With faded colors turing black and white Your mid wrestles with it day and night (Chorus) You need to free yourself from the past and the pains and the ones you've blamed Ask yourself "Would I know what to do, just to make it through?" You never missed a beat you never wained But all you know now is how to point the blame There's something in us all that gets us through You need to find your cause once you do You will free yourself from the past and the pains and the ones you've blamed Because you asked yourself "Would I know what to do, just to make it through?" (Bridge) Now that you found someone to help you through A certain someone who tells you what to do Time to fly,raise up your hands, make them understand See it through and make it all come true. Chorus |
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lengold
definitely succeeded - I can hear this as a real radio hit. Superb.
Cheers
Len
lavalamp
Agree with Len. Give this to Robbie Williams or something. It has a great hook at the chorus. "You need to free yourself".
Telling you, this is a hit.
DL'd
Dave
sheilad
Just the message I needed on a day like today. Definately hits a chord with the lyrics. Thanks for the download....this one will be playing on for a while in my head.
smokey bacon jnr
Really nice tune. I can see them singing this at top volume on X Factor (that's American Idol for you non brits!!). Simon would love it. Send it to an agent this instant!!
Karmatoburn
really great singing and I love the production/mix. The guitar was an added treat
J.A.Stewart
I like the approach you've taken here. It sounds good.
My only suggestions would be to spend a little bit of time to add some accents to your static drum track and to slowly fade in the lead guitar part into the mix as you approach the guitar break. Right now the vocal is competing with the guitar part a bit. ;)
--- Joe
bud
I'd like a little info production info - Logic - GB? Are you playing everything? Good set of lyrics and vocal performance. Everything else sounds good too - but it does get a little clogged when everything is in the mix at full.
Feter
Wow what a powerful song ..very new style and its
so solid with your great vocal work ...nice lyrics
the drums gave it extra solid sound ..top notch ..
thnx alot for sharin !!!!
regulus
Nice layering, word smithing and overall basic projection. The other side is that the acoustic guitar didn't seem to be a clean and clear as it could have been and there was missing a midrange crisp snap to it. Try, in the master channel EQ a little massaging of mid gain and range for alternative effects to the final mix.
This is not attempt at all, but a great song. Even with the above critique I'm taking a copy for the tunes index. Good work. Don't stop.
MarkHolbrook
All your songs are like killer ballads... This is right up there with the rest of them! Simply excellent!
Once again I love the vocals! Really superb!
Re-al
Very pro. What a great voice you have. Really into the harmonies; is that all you or is there a compadre? Whatever; it's superb.
Guitar is top notch, nice use of pads too. Fades a bit quickly tho', wish it was longer.
BossHook
Great message and very unique recording elements on the lead guitar. Your acoustics sound warmer with each recording. Your vocal is always at the top of any singer around.
Love how you kick in the beat with the lyric "never missed a beat".
Most of all, your production of the "song" is right on here - not too long, tight and right.
Way to go again, and I will be hunting you down with my cane soon enough!