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These Few Words


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Joshosh

 Genre: Acoustic

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For the beauty of my dreams.
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Your hair's all over
My bed, my clothes. draped on my shoulder
From where you lay I'm looking over, and melting into you

Outside there's lightning
The steady rhythm of life is frightening
I'm staring down the ghosts while writing
my very first song for you

And I can barely look at you
But maybe these few words will do

Stand by your open window
And turn your baby brown eyes to the moon
Where you are is where I'll find you
Be my guide, cause I'm coming home soon

I'm not religious but I pray
We'll build another streak someday
I'll find my way to you

And baby girl
while you arrange the stars as pearls
you are the one that lights my world
No distance can take that away

And I can barely look at you
but maybe these few words will do

Stand by your open window
Turn your baby brown eyes to the moon
Where you are is where I'll find you
So be my guide, cause I'm coming hoem soon (2x)

So
Light up your eyes
This is no time for tears
I'm right beside you
whenever you need me
so come and get me dear

So
Light up your eyes
and slow down your fears
Cause even when you can't see me
I'll be beside you
If you need me dear

my dear
Song Stats
Hits: 397
Comments: 4
Fans: 1
Plays: 47
Downloads: 0
Votes: 2
Uploaded: Nov 21, 2008 - 05:56:14 PM
Last Updated: Nov 21, 2008 - 05:56:14 PM Last Played: Nov 02, 2009 - 03:21:43 PM
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Hardware:
Mac Pro, Eurorack mixer, Rode NT1A mic, Yamaha 12 string
Software:
Garageband
Comments
pablatone said 352 days ago (November 21st, 2008)
good tune!
are you gonna do anything more with it? I think it's worth it. Your backing vocal tracks are a little out of tune, the idea is there but the execution wasn't quite on. This is the first tune I've heard of your's. You've got some talent! thanks for sharing this tune.
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Joshosh said 352 days ago (November 21st, 2008)
re:
I agree, it feels close but not quite drilled yet. Thanks for taking the time to listen. I'm going to have my sisters take a stab at it next. They rock. Thanks again.
Check out my latest song called These Few Words
Feter said 352 days ago (November 21st, 2008)
These Few Words
awesome ...love this honmest lovin song ..you
cn go on and on adding insteruments but fair and
just perfect this way WITH harmonies ...thnx alot
for sharin !!!!
Joshosh said 352 days ago (November 21st, 2008)
Thanks
Thanks Feter. That's really kind of you to say. I appreciate you listening!
Check out my latest song called These Few Words
brebell226 said 352 days ago (November 21st, 2008)
Sisterly Love
i figured i may as well publicly tell you that i really really like this song. I'll save the nit picky stuff for later but this song is awesome and i'm working out some prettty cool piano parts to go with it- yay for the modern von trapps. Kira is busy with a new song but i will play this for her asap. K i love you bye :)

ps "check"?
Check out my latest song called Sleepless Nights
screamalexz said 347 days ago (November 27th, 2008)
nice
i like the start of singing soft and going into a powerful chorus. the lyrics are nice as well. i could see this being very powerful live.
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