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The Rum Diary


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HypnotiQ Sorcere

 Genre: Rock

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Description
Really weird song, with a weird chord arrngement, especially for country rock...
But the arrangement came out rather beautiful
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Lyrics
The Rum Diary

Verse 1
The cuffs were on me,
Had the inscribings of a misery,
Tattooed on my wayward tongue,
As i was pushed into the scene.
My eyes were glazed over,
They're splitting into double vision,
These demons through the night,
have stolen my feeling.

Hook
And then you will read...
A chapter of this diary.
Sitting here drunk in a cell,
while your voice is taunting me.
And then you will see...
The bittersweet symphony,
Linked to all your lovers here,.
In this rum diary.

Verse 3
For days you fed me honey,
To try to sweeten my blackheart.
For weeks you called me a liar,
stole my soul, then tore it apart.
You tried to kiss the wound,
You couldn't pantomime.
Bought a rose for the healing,
Laid it down for the crime.

Hook 2
And then you will read...
a chapter of this diary.
Sitting here drunk in a cell,
while your voice taunting me.
And then you will see...
That bittersweet symphony,
Linked to all your lovers here,
In this rum diary.


Song Stats
Hits: 315
Comments: 3
Fans: 2
Plays: 20
Downloads: 18
Votes: 2
Uploaded: Dec 20, 2008 - 02:44:59 AM
Last Updated: Dec 20, 2008 - 03:17:10 PM Last Played: Apr 09, 2009 - 12:23:49 AM
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Comments
Feter said 323 days ago (December 20th, 2008)
The Rum Diary
I dunno why you called it rockabilly ?? while its a nice rock ballad ..
great singin ...very nice piano very nice lyrics ...ye the arrangment s
so gorgeous ..so wide and thats cool ...thnx alot for sharin !!!!
HypnotiQ Sorcere said 323 days ago (December 20th, 2008)
hehe
I called it rockabilly, cause its country rock, But I dunno, I guess your right, def not rockabilly
Check out my latest song called The Rum Diary
regulus said 322 days ago (December 20th, 2008)
This is a likable tune
nice layering and construction. There are some good hooks to it that had me wanting to listen again. The only drew back to the production is the vox delivery. It seemed to me to be a little to laid back and disinterested in being clearly heard. Articulation is one of the major characters that make the song memorable and creates a marketable product. This has a lot of things going for it like the structure and the word smithing. If you do a retake on the vocals for a little more articulation, I would really like to hear it. Good luck you have something going for yourself with you art......
Check out my latest song called Won:23
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