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Heart on Trial (w/ Ramonaji and MickD)


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Another production by the superlative Mark Deskin (MickD), with vocal invitations going to Ramona (Ramonaji) and myself. Thanks Mark!

Mark's Comments (MickD):

HAPPY NEW YEAR!!!!!!!

For your listening pleasure this brand new year, we bring you a little Film Noir Theatre! A backing track from a few months ago, re-worked and enhanced by two very special MacJammers! RamonJi with some smokey French stylings that will make you feel as if you are in a B&W French film! Daniel with some gorgeous Cello and playing the part of the Suave Prince of Debonair!!!

Lovely work and patience shown by both artists as I hummed and hawed over the mix! Thank you both and we all hope you enjoy the scene we lay before you...

Enjoy and all our best for the New Year!

Music and Production: MickD
Female Vocal: RamonaJi
Male Vocal, Lyrics and Cello: Lunatrick
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Lyrics
Heart on Trial (Music by MickD, Lyrics by Luna Trick)

Along the Sienne we watch the sunlight fade
Daring to kiss by the palisades
Pull a Gitane from a faded pack
Ruby lips now drag on drag
You blew a ring to reel me in
Now I teeter on the fringe of sin
Only this morning you were a Cafe smile
And now you put my heart on trial

Left you a note by the Window sill
Crept like a thief while your body was still
What can I say? I'm a lover's lie
My head can say what my heart denies
It's always been easy
I never felt sleezy
What happened this time?
I'm a man in my prime

Search for you down the champs de l'elysee
I'm a beggar in a daze, day after day
Where can I find you? My heart is undone
Haunted by shadows, scorched by the sun
I'm a geezer in peril, a debonair bum
A zombified prince, just a part of the sum
Suave empty posture, in search of the source
I'm an enchanted dreamer enslaved to remorse

I would love you but I frittered you away
I Would cherish you, my love from yesterday
I would love you but I frittered you away
I Would cherish you, my love from yesterday

Heart on trial, heart on trial
Now you put my heart on trial!
Song Stats
Hits: 699
Comments: 19
Fans: 14
Plays: 60
Downloads: 32
Votes: 3
Uploaded: Jan 01, 2009 - 02:00:16 AM
Last Updated: Jan 01, 2009 - 02:05:12 AM Last Played: Oct 13, 2009 - 12:38:16 PM
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Hardware:
MickD's usual box of tricks. Ramonaji's fantastic pipes. Luna's croon & cello!
Software:
GB/Logic
Comments
paul f. page said 311 days ago (January 1st, 2009)
Happy New Year....
...I think you're the first to post for 2009! Well done.
There IS a film here and the lyrics tell that story very clearly, though I wish the female vocal was easier to understand without the lyric sheet for help. The production elements are super...great mix of stereo vocals and that driving percussion track keeps everything slammin' ahead insistently. (I am a melody guy, however, and hear this piece mostly as a recitative on pretty much one note. It DOES work that way--no question. I just wonder if some variety in pitch--perhaps a tonal shift in a couple spots--might not increase the effectiveness of the whole.) This is a wonderful collaboration all around.
Peace.
Paul
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LunaTrick said 310 days ago (January 2nd, 2009)
Thanks Paul
Glad you enjoyed overall. I'm sorry we didn't add Ramona's lyrics in with mine... I think her part really makes the song and there is a subtle dialogue going on between us. I take your point about melody... and I could have done a better job with variance. Having said that, I think the same criticism could be made of most rock/pop songs. You would really hate EMO - where a whole song vocal contains three whiny notes sung over and over.
Check out my latest song called Luna Gypsy Heart II (Eternal Firelight)
Feter said 311 days ago (January 1st, 2009)
Heart on Trial
Happy new year folks ...
very nice colab ..this song has alot of flavours
the feelin of friendship produced a very nice song
thnx alot for sharin !!!
LunaTrick said 310 days ago (January 2nd, 2009)
Very flavourful
Is what we intended. But I have to say that Mark's music and Ramona's vocal are what drove the piece!
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bud said 311 days ago (January 1st, 2009)
Great start to the new year
I f this is any indication it's gonna be a good one. Excellent production (of course) - and really well written lyrics (naturally). Suberb vocals (what else?), oh yeah - real cello - what a treat. Thanks all for the collab. Happy New Year!
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LunaTrick said 310 days ago (January 2nd, 2009)
It's gonna be a great year...
With lots of great music from the top dawg... BUD!
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mowguy3 said 311 days ago (January 1st, 2009)
Happy New Year
to you and yours. Great track all of you.
Be well, Russ
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LunaTrick said 310 days ago (January 2nd, 2009)
Cheers Russ
Glad you enjoyed!
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segiperkasa said 311 days ago (January 1st, 2009)
cool collab
wow.. this is a cool collab... keep it up...
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segiperkasa said 311 days ago (January 1st, 2009)
cool collab
wow.. this is a cool collab... keep it up...
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LunaTrick said 310 days ago (January 2nd, 2009)
That we will...
And I will take the time to get to know your music too!
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TERRAPLANE said 310 days ago (January 2nd, 2009)
Great Collaboration here
For me it has an Enigma flavor & a well produced sound. Well done to all!
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LunaTrick said 300 days ago (January 12th, 2009)
Yes...
I heard the Enigma/Deep Forest thing as well. Thanks!
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damiengh said 310 days ago (January 2nd, 2009)
Labor of Love
Production (love), style (exquisite) , excitement (want more & more & more ), what a team.

Reeling, Reeling,... full force... one more time.. ok... here goes again.

Making my new headphones so Happy you are.


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LunaTrick said 300 days ago (January 12th, 2009)
Thanks
For kind comment and support!
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MarkHolbrook said 303 days ago (January 9th, 2009)
Wow
I liked this a lot. I love when the pounding beat comes in with your voice. Very cool!
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LunaTrick said 300 days ago (January 12th, 2009)
Mark Thanks
For your mammoth commenting... it means a lot that you took the time.
Check out my latest song called Luna Gypsy Heart II (Eternal Firelight)
Alannah said 254 days ago (February 27th, 2009)
This is hot .....
.... I was already getting some collab ideas ... and now this seals the deal ... watch out for some email Ramona ! Luna .. you already know my idea ! Great stuff all round !
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