Broken (w/Lyrics)

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PrototypeEightyOne

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No Loops. keyed/sequenced.

A song im working on about a girl who was something she claimed she wasnt.
work in progress. i was just messing around but I want to redo some of the doubling, and lines.
will post lyrics soon.
feedback and comments encouraged. thanks.

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Hits: 427
Comments: 17
Fans: 9
Plays: 89
Downloads: 19
Votes: 1
Uploaded: Apr 14, 2009 - 07:29:48 AM
Last Updated: May 10, 2009 - 07:39:04 AM Last Played: Oct 16, 2009 - 11:49:03 AM

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davisamerica	davisamerica said 209 days ago (April 14th, 2009)
	woa .... man ... excellent! Check out my latest song called No Son(egobandit band)

PrototypeEightyOne	PrototypeEightyOne said 209 days ago (April 14th, 2009)
	yo thanks dude, glad u could dig it Check out my latest song called Mushroom Cloud 9

magnatone	magnatone said 209 days ago (April 14th, 2009)
	Broken woa - yeah, what jack said! great work jay! Check out my latest song called Symphonic Smackdown

PrototypeEightyOne	PrototypeEightyOne said 209 days ago (April 14th, 2009)
	yo very much appreciated, thanks :) Check out my latest song called Mushroom Cloud 9

Char	Char said 209 days ago (April 14th, 2009)
	Beat-a-licious! Went through some "jolt" in order to get this rapid-fire down? Impressive vocal. Love the buzziness and dinginess. Thanks. Check out my latest song called Do Any Thing

PrototypeEightyOne	PrototypeEightyOne said 209 days ago (April 14th, 2009)
	yo so this time its my voice char. lol. thanks for checkin it out. Check out my latest song called Mushroom Cloud 9

Sir Bass	Sir Bass said 209 days ago (April 14th, 2009)
	sweet lyrics and the beat is catchy, nice play on the keys. Check out my latest song called Street Living

PrototypeEightyOne	PrototypeEightyOne said 209 days ago (April 14th, 2009)
	yo thanks, it means a lot to me. Check out my latest song called Mushroom Cloud 9

abfkingsport	abfkingsport said 209 days ago (April 14th, 2009)
	ABFkingsport Excellent dude. Love the samples. Great rap, spot on. Definitley radio ready. downloaded. The King Check out my latest song called Gold Digger

PrototypeEightyOne	PrototypeEightyOne said 209 days ago (April 14th, 2009)
	yo thanks dude...glad you were diggin this enough for a dl Check out my latest song called Mushroom Cloud 9

kassia

kassia said 209 days ago (April 14th, 2009)

love that
moving bass synth line. really cool use of the vocal clips. i'm not sure if i'm supposed to...lol..proto, i always hear a bit of humor moving in and out of your killer beats and great synth work. like, you're really having fun with what you're doing and not taking yourself too seriously, despite the subject matter. i think this one could be much longer. maybe do a key modulation? my ear kept wanting to hear it climb up higher into that great female vocal clip you were throwing in. great work as always. really enjoyed.

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PrototypeEightyOne

PrototypeEightyOne said 209 days ago (April 14th, 2009)

yo
thanks kassia. I love how you just come out and say it like that lol..like yor not suppose to feel that way. :P you know what i really thought about it, and i wanted to have this dark humour to this. i didnt actaully do anything lyrically with it...but the way the beat flows and the way i jump in @ 1:12 with the samples creates that vibe. its to kind of show i have gotten over it but it hurts, you know.. at the point i can almost laugh at it but not quite :P life goes on. thanks again.

Check out my latest song called Mushroom Cloud 9

ElPeruano	ElPeruano said 207 days ago (April 16th, 2009)
	word the backing track reminded me a lot of the Faint. i like the way the lyrics build with the progression of the song. really good man. your delivery is dope. keep spittin! Check out my latest song called Requiem (w/ TNTrio)

PrototypeEightyOne	PrototypeEightyOne said 207 days ago (April 16th, 2009)
	yo means a lot comin from an emcee like yourself el p. youve got such a smooth delivery and flow, it almost stops me from posting lyrics so i dont look bad. :P im hoping to keep elevating my delivery aspect. thanks again peace man Check out my latest song called Mushroom Cloud 9

Konscious

Konscious said 207 days ago (April 16th, 2009)

chea
nicely done brotha, i heard this before but the last part or verse wasn't on what i heard, that and the chorus were my favorite parts. I'll prob leave this one for you to solo since it's already posted and like i mentioned i don't have the material to work with such a theme at this point...
Props though, on your first full on song. Beat and vocal production on point.

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PrototypeEightyOne

PrototypeEightyOne said 206 days ago (April 17th, 2009)

yo
thanks man, as I said to ElP its greatly appreciated, You guys are 2 of my fav emcees on here, along with spitlogic. I feel the same way, the chorus and 1:12+ are my favorite parts. on paper i like the intro verse, but my execution needs to be better. ( especially the delivery on the doubling ) Im about to finish up a spitlogic track using his cult of anubis vocals, but after that we should jump on a collab. I'll send you a track soon. peace dude

Check out my latest song called Mushroom Cloud 9

bud	bud said 206 days ago (April 17th, 2009)
	Really creative musical setting and excellent production. Digging the vocals - can see where you might do some tweaking. Great track as it is though. Check out my latest song called Expanding Toys (Halloween Remix)