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So this is an updated version of the song Broken that I uploaded recently. I am a lot happier with the mix on this version and most of the vocals have been re-recorded.
Words by Liam Barbour and Gordon Macdonald
Music by Ewan Crossan
Acoustic Guitar: Ewan Crossan
Vocals/Arrangement/Mixing/Additional instrumentation: Liam Barbour
Words by Liam Barbour and Gordon Macdonald
Music by Ewan Crossan
Acoustic Guitar: Ewan Crossan
Vocals/Arrangement/Mixing/Additional instrumentation: Liam Barbour
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Lyrics
i’m broken down
The pieces of my heart
Just bleed ever after
I was your clown
But baby your circus needs
love more than laughter
Remember now?
Dancing, pretending.
Full of half-finished singing
So kiss me now,
And I'll show you forever
As cold as you've shown me
Remember I’ll be here when you change your mind (slowly)
If it’s a matter of trust then I’m sure we'll find it
cause i want this more than
and i need you less than
i did before
I'm just a man,
Built up by your promise
Empty... whatever
How do you suppose?
I take this while smiling,
This pointless surrender
Remember I’ll be here when you change your mind (slowly)
If it’s a matter of trust then I’m sure we'll find it (find it)
cause i want this more than
and i need you less than
cause i want this more than
and i need you less than
(i did before)
Remember I’ll be here when you change your mind
if its a matter of faith then ill pray you find it
Words by Liam Barbour and Gordon Macdonald
The pieces of my heart
Just bleed ever after
I was your clown
But baby your circus needs
love more than laughter
Remember now?
Dancing, pretending.
Full of half-finished singing
So kiss me now,
And I'll show you forever
As cold as you've shown me
Remember I’ll be here when you change your mind (slowly)
If it’s a matter of trust then I’m sure we'll find it
cause i want this more than
and i need you less than
i did before
I'm just a man,
Built up by your promise
Empty... whatever
How do you suppose?
I take this while smiling,
This pointless surrender
Remember I’ll be here when you change your mind (slowly)
If it’s a matter of trust then I’m sure we'll find it (find it)
cause i want this more than
and i need you less than
cause i want this more than
and i need you less than
(i did before)
Remember I’ll be here when you change your mind
if its a matter of faith then ill pray you find it
Words by Liam Barbour and Gordon Macdonald
sloparts
Love the structure and the movement in the song. Love the vocal on it too, especially on the chorus, there's a lot of power there. The whole song has great melody and character to it too.
A few small nits;
One was I had a hard time understanding what you meant on the last two lines of the chorus. it was pretty vague to me.
The other was that the vocal seemed to drop out on words like pretending, or singing, as well as a few other spots to where I wasn't sure what you were saying. If I hadn't had the lyrics I would have missed the meaning in a few places in the song, at least a little bit.
On the last, keep in mind that I am hard of hearing so I lose things like that sometimes. But just in case it wasn't my ears, I thought I'd mention it.
Neither of these things take away from the beautiful job you all did on crafting this song or the wonderful full sound it has. Excellent job on the mix for everything else.
Kudos
Ed